RJMLTisms...
Feb. 15th, 2005 07:50 am...or, how I will never, ever complain ever again about EBD not keeping her characters straight.
I've been reading through draft two of Shadow Games and I've discovered that:
1) I can't decide whether one character's surname is Mendez or Martinez
2) Within about three paragraphs, Miller is both the bad girl and the good guy
3) I have waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too many surnames beginning with M (Miller, Mendez, Marchant) [though at this late stage in the game, I don't think I'm going to be doing too many name changes]
*sigh*
I've been reading through draft two of Shadow Games and I've discovered that:
1) I can't decide whether one character's surname is Mendez or Martinez
2) Within about three paragraphs, Miller is both the bad girl and the good guy
3) I have waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too many surnames beginning with M (Miller, Mendez, Marchant) [though at this late stage in the game, I don't think I'm going to be doing too many name changes]
*sigh*
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Date: 2005-02-15 12:18 pm (UTC)If it's any comfort, I never noticed any of those things.
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Date: 2005-02-15 06:28 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-02-15 03:09 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-02-15 06:28 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-02-15 03:10 pm (UTC)You could just meld them into Menendez and let the connotations fly.
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Date: 2005-02-15 06:29 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-02-15 09:52 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-02-15 09:59 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-02-16 12:25 am (UTC)And totally unrelated to the subject at hand - I'm loving your cute plot bunny icon! :)
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Date: 2005-02-16 01:14 am (UTC)And thanks.