This is possibly a long shot...

[athersgeo]

...but it's always worth a try: Does anyone on my flist know anything about guns and if so, would you be willing to take a look at a section of action from Shadow Games and check me for correct terminology and proceedure?

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[tptigger.livejournal.com]

I don't, but if no one else does, I've discovered a community called little_details that might be able to help. :)

[beeej.livejournal.com]

Personally, only somewhat. However, a good friend is a shooting instructor and very educated in such matters. I'm sure she'd be happy to take a look. :)

[athersgeo.livejournal.com]

Thank you :) I'll get the section together and email it to you, if that's OK?

[athersgeo.livejournal.com]

If I had a specific question, it might very well help, but this more a question of "does this scene make actual technical sense" - and I think I'd be shy about posting it in public before it's been checked.

[beeej.livejournal.com]

Sure. Send it to me at Becky @ Beckyjo.com

[tptigger.livejournal.com]

Oh, oops, OK. Good luck with that ;)

[cmar-wingnut.livejournal.com]

I'm far from an expert, but I've used a rifle and (only once) a pistol, years ago. Don't know how much help I'd be, but feel free to ask.