Having read the first two chapters of the story (and not being able to stomach any more!), I think your review was entirely justified - and I think you have much more patience than I do! If she can't take constructive criticism then she shouldn't be publishing her work in an open forum. Did you send the second email btw?
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Date: 2004-04-16 01:01 pm (UTC)